Wednesday, August 4, 2010

Haiku

Hi there, this is the Haiku I am doing for my Language Arts ACE.
It is entitled: Rain
Enjoy!

Rain
As the rain keeps falling
Across the road I feel the
Rain dripping on me

Parody of a poem

Hi there, I am going to do a parody for a poem to make it funnier. It is for my Language Arts Ace Points. For those of you who do not know what parody means, it means:
Parody - A humorous or satirical imitation of a serious piece of literature or writing

Firstly, here is the SERIOUS piece of poem:

Death Penalty by Jess Terry
'Life for a life' she snarls,
eyes burning in flame,
'That's still a murder,
not some pawn in a game'
The voices of passion,
The eyes feverishly sane,
The patron saint of life,
The unforgiving saint of pain,
'Death to those who deserve it'
clenched jaw,
'That only hurts more in pain'
emotions raw
Death penalty argument,
across the english class,
'What do you think? ' pointing finger,
'I think I'll Pass'


After editing it and making it even funnier, ..........


Life Penalty by Mervyn Cheong
'Death for a death' the devil sobbed,
eyes watered with tears,
'That's still not fun,
like a boring game'
The voices of happiness,
The eyes brightly lit,
The devil of death,
The incorrigible mistake,
'Revival to those who deserve it'
Big smiles,
'That enlightens my day',
Smiles bloom,
Life Penalty debate,
across the enthusiastic class
'What do you have to say?' pointing finger,
'Let there be life penalties instead....'

Monday, May 24, 2010

My Poem

Chaos reigned,
Bewilderment was everywhere.
Students used iPhones,
Some listened to Earphones.

Bad ones were fighting,
Good ones were reading.
Just when the teacher stepped in,
Everything began halting.

The teacher was smiling,
Everyone was fretting.
The teacher whipped out an Animal Farm book,
But none were interested enough to look.

The teacher nagged,
Blah! Blah! Blah!
Test! Test! Test!
Failing would be the Best.

English Online Lesson - Poetry Figurative Language

Fast rode the knight by Stephen Crane
Fast rode the knight
With spurs, hot and reeking,
Ever waving an eager sword,
"To save my lady!"
Fast rode the knight,
And leaped from saddle to war.
Men of steel flickered and gleamed
Like riot of silver lights,
And the gold of the knight's good banner
Still waved on a castle wall.
. . . . .
A horse,
Blowing, staggering, bloody thing,
Forgotten at foot of castle wall.
A horse
Dead at foot of castle wall.



Questions
1) How are the figurative language used in the poem? Give the specific word(s), explain what type of figurative language it is and why the poet chose to use this figurative language?

2) Tell us why you like this poem in no less than 100 words.

Answers
1) This poem uses plenty of Figurative Language. In the first Stanza, he used the words "Fast rode the knight" two times as a hyperbole which helps the reader imagine the speed at which the knight was riding. In the second Stanza, he used the words "A horse" two times to let the readers imagine the horse and its current state. In the first Stanza, he used personification to describe the words "Ever waving an eager sword" . As waving a sword usually means going to battle, so he is personifying bravery. In the first stanza, he uses similes. The words were "Like riot of silver lights", which helps the reader create an image of the gleaming armor the knights were wearing.
2) I liked the poem as it symbolises the bravery of a knight and his loyalty to the Queen. This poem also shows how much a sacrifice the knight was willing to make to save the Queen.

Friday, April 30, 2010

Animal Farm

Hi all viewers! Today, my blog topic is about the book by George Orwell, "Animal Farm". If you have any queries or objections, feel free to post them in the comment box. Now, let me start on the topic. I will be talking about Animal Farm.
Animal Farm is a successful book written by George Orwell which I read a while ago. At first when I bought the book, I thought that it was a book for children as the cover page shows a picture of a cartoon boar. I didn't want to buy the book but my English teacher insisted on it. I carried the book back to class and thought people might laugh and think that I was reading a baby book. However, my opinions of the books were changed by a person from 1O4. He said that Animal Farm was a very nice and interesting book. When I opened the book, I found out that it was a complicated book full of words. What's more, it contained a vast history in it in an indirect manner. The book actually had the same situation as in reality. Each character in the book represents another character real life. It is very hard to remember who each character represents with all the complicated names such as Tzar Nicholas II and Leon Trotsky.
Animal Farm is a book about some animals in a farm that have in common, a dream to overthrow Man and gain freedom. Initially, readers may think that everything ends well when the rebellion is successful. However, towards the end of the story, readers realise that nothing has actually changed at all. The treatment the animals received was the same before and after. If you are interested in reading the book, you can borrow it from the library or buy it from some bookstores. Many copies come with different cover designs. Well, that's all for today. Bye!

My favourite singing group

Hi all! Today, I will be blogging about my favourite singers and some of their songs. Test yourself, see how many singers and songs you know altogether. If you need some help, visit "YouTube". Now, let me test you. Do you know the following singers?
- The Black Eyed Peas
- Lady Gaga

These two singing groups are my favourite and these are some of the hits I like from them both. The songs from the Black Eyed Peas include: "Meet me halfway", "Boom Boom Pow", "Pump It" and lastly " I Gotta feeling". The songs I like from Lady Gaga include: "Bad Romance", "Poker Face" and "Paparazzi". If you are interested in the songs, please visit "YouTube". Let me warn you beforehand. If you hear the songs, do it with some careful thought in mind. When I first heard "Meet me halfway", I was so immersed in the music that I got "addicted" and even downloaded the song into my phone. That's all for now, see you again!

Details about Mousehunt

Hey all! I'm back with the details of Mousehunt I promised in my previous post. Now, let me further explain the game to you. It consists of a few ranks, ranging from the lousiest Novice to the best Countess. In the world, there are only three countesses, according to the database. The ranks can be found on the mousehunt wiki. The link is http://mhwiki.hitgrab.com/wiki/index.php/Main_Page. You will have a hunter's horn at the start and after every 15 minutes, you can sound it and get some mouse. The lousiest mouse is white mouse, while the strongest is the Dragon mouse. For some mice, you can even get real life cash! You can obviously tell which is the white mouse, which is the dragon mouse and which is the Leprechaun mouse which gives money. Obviously, you need cheese to catch mouse. Common cheese ranges from cheddar to the unique cheese which requires cash, Superbrie. Some cheese is also received through crafting. If you would craft curds and whey with salt, you will get white cheddar. However, crafting is not always successful. That's all for today, see you again!